My Pockets

-MP3 player
-I carry this so that I can listen to my music, because my favorite music never plays on the radio.
-Headphones
-I carry this so that I can actually hear my MP3.
-Book The Catcher in the Rye
-I carry this so that I can fully enjoy the context of this work.
-My drawings
-I carry these because, in boredom, I find it easy for me to draw.

In the court scene, you can tell that Tom Robinson is nervous. He was at the stand, and the jury was looking on as his side of the story was told. Tom's black velvet skin had begun to shine. He was beginning to persperate. The stress of the court case was making him nervous that the jury will believe him.
1.I don’t understand what this statement means. Do you mean will wont.
2. The stress of the court case was making him nervous that the jury will believe him. Also you spelled sweat wrong (I couldn’t spell it either)
3.Where are your quotes?
4.I don’t get what you are trying to say in the second sentence?
I’ll correct it the best I can…
In the court scene, you can tell that Tom Robinson is nervous. As he was sitting at the stand, and the jury was looking on as his side of the story was told. “Tom's black velvet skin had begun to shine.” He was beginning to persperate. The stress of the court case was making him nervous of whether or not the jury will believe him.
The second sentence was kind of setting the scene for the quote.

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In the court scene, you can tell that Tom Robinson is nervous. He was at the stand, and the jury was looking on as his side of the story was told. Tom's black velvet skin had begun to shine. He was beginning to persperate. The stress of the court case was making him nervous that the jury will believe him.

My weekend was fairly exciting. On Friday, I went to a metal show, featuring Medea, By My Blood, Under the Rising Tide, and I Am The Ocean! It was freaking amazing! I got to talk to the bands before the show started, and they were really nice. The guitarist of I Am The Ocean showed me the opening guitar part to one of their new songs (it hasn't even come out yet). They were going to finish the show with Medea, but a fight broke out in the middle of I Am The Ocean. They ended the show then and there, but the lead singer of I Am The Ocean gave me an autographed poster! On Saturday, I went to see the movie Game Plan. On Sunday, I spent the day playing guitar, and learned a new song (Kryptonite). Monday was kind of a more mellow day, as I spent the day on the computer talking to my friends.



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