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Tuesday, November 13, 2007

In the court scene, you can tell that Tom Robinson is nervous. He was at the stand, and the jury was looking on as his side of the story was told. Tom's black velvet skin had begun to shine. He was beginning to persperate. The stress of the court case was making him nervous that the jury will believe him.
1.I don’t understand what this statement means. Do you mean will wont.
2. The stress of the court case was making him nervous that the jury will believe him. Also you spelled sweat wrong (I couldn’t spell it either)
3.Where are your quotes?
4.I don’t get what you are trying to say in the second sentence?
I’ll correct it the best I can…
In the court scene, you can tell that Tom Robinson is nervous. As he was sitting at the stand, and the jury was looking on as his side of the story was told. “Tom's black velvet skin had begun to shine.” He was beginning to persperate. The stress of the court case was making him nervous of whether or not the jury will believe him.
The second sentence was kind of setting the scene for the quote.

1 comments:

~!~KeLsEy~!~ said...

This is good Bryce but I think that you need to do a little more work on your quote okay